| Number1 on Mar 12, 2012 at 4:04:21 PM This is not meant to embarass (sp?), but there are so many grammatical errors in both your paragraph here and your home page that if that were a big problem to correct, then I would be suggesting giving up and joining the Army, as I cannot imagine anyone who did know 5th grade grammar not being turned off - after ROFL.
Fortunately, there are a whole lot of people from my generation - retired teachers, etc. - who actually know English grammar and who would probably be willing to correct your site for a pittance. Check out some of the sites for ghost writers.
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